Blog Week 13: Peers; Strengths & Weaknesses

Throughout this fall semester 2012, the knowledge that has been provided to us as a class has been resourceful by explaining the process of writing and not the "why?" or the "how come?"  Every single blog we have written has explained just that, the writing process.  Now we are asked to peer edit our peers their strengths and weakness.  We all know of course to take this as positive criticism, because it only allows us to be better writers.  Here are a couple of my peers in their strengths and weakness. 

Hello Kaid, in blog week 10A: http://kmprovence.blogspot.com/2012/10/blog-week-10a.html, your first statement, "The importance of an introduction to any essay can't be overstated."  Terrific point!  You are exactly, right!  The object is to draw your audience in and not mislead them by turning them off from your essay.  Another point you mentioned, "If you want to persuade them into something, you should glorify it in every possible way, while still being able to support your claims," is a effective and strong word in explaining to your audience and getting across the importance of an introduction.  Job well done Kaid, you executed this blog entry!
Kaid, in blog week 12A:http://kmprovence.blogspot.com/2012/11/blog-week-12a.html, the first point mentioned stands valid and right on point.  Researching the subject is critical.  Next, you may want to suggest who the target audience will be.  This action will help you in selecting the correct comprehending strategies with your lingo, the process, and the depth of the article in order to have your audience follow along.  Another helpful hint, do not forget the purpose of the rhetorical tools we have learned during the semester.  Using a couple can help the reader understand the comprehension of your essay.  There is always room for improvement!  

Very well implemented Ky,
Hello again Ky, in blog week 12A: http://kyybyrd.blogspot.com/, after piecing it all together you should suggest to target a specific audience that way you can utilize certain verbage in order for your audience with the process and the depth of the essay.  This will guide your audience throughout the article without them wandering off from the original subject.  Afterwards, suggest the dumping of the body onto paper as the meat of the essay.  You want to pour your thoughts, feelings, and facts onto paper in order to create the body.  Secondly, creating the conclusion then the introduction.  These are the main philosophies our instructor has taught us throughout the semester.  If you stick to these rules you will have a successful paper.  Good luck!
Ky, in blog week 8B: http://kyybyrd.blogspot.com/2012/10/blog-week-8b.html, when explaining the extended definition, remember to open up to your audience about what you are writing.  That way you intrigue your audience and keep them captivated with your knowledge.  Write everything down first, but do not forget to go back to elaborate on the "whys?" and the "how comes?"  Meaning the extended definitions intertwine with the meaning of your essay.  They go in depth in order for your audience to follow with the writer.  There is always room for improvement!